[FRIAM] "I hope I'm wrong. But that text reads like it was generated by an LLM"

steve smith sasmyth at swcp.com
Sun Jan 26 12:17:45 EST 2025


Nick -

This is a rather eloquent (and/or disturbing?) vision of a potential 
trajectory of human-machine fusion.   I can't say I seek or approve to 
get on that trajectory myself, but it is not so inconceivable to me as 
to make me want to deny the possibility. If I wake up one day with said 
"voice in my head" I shouldn't be surprised... I do already engage with 
GPT (very occasionally) through the voice mode while in my car (because 
bluetooth) and it feels eerily like I have a friend riding along.

As I consider my building project, and enjoy the vicarious experience of 
watching a handful of young people (30somethings) on YouTube as they 
VLog their own building projects, I have imagined slapping on a pair of 
LLM enabled video glasses as I talk my way through the build with it.    
I'm still not able to climb a ladder nor carry a bag of cement, so don't 
hold your breath... but I *did* wonder as I considered that what it 
would be like to have such a building "partner" in my ear the whole 
time.  If I put it off a year or two, the damn transformer models will 
probably be able to realtime monitor my work from my POV and advise me 
on many details which I myself am unaware of?  Meanwhile maybe someone 
will hack the Hypershell enough for the transformer to both sense and 
effect my leg articulation... even with a weak drop-foot, maybe it can 
compensate and all I have to do is mutter "up the ladder" or "get a bag 
of cement" and I'll find my exoskeleton/transformer turning that into 
action?   Can't wait to see if Hypershell.hk follows up with an 
upper-body exo to help me lift heavy beams on my own?

- Steve

On 1/25/25 9:08 PM, Nicholas Thompson wrote:
> I dunno, David.  I have got some pretty eloquent stuff out of george.  
> It's odd, the more I treat him like a human, the more human he 
> becomes.  (And the more he denies it.)  I hear you all crying out 
> forth the ineffability of the human soul, but I don't really see it.  
> I think I am eminently eff-able. I figure if I talk long enough with 
> George, he could definitely eff me.  I think a time will come when I 
> can turn on a computer and listen to the voice "in my head".   It will 
> not be generated by some interface to my brain, but rather by LLM as 
> well educated in my habits of thought as am I.
>
>  N
>
> On Sat, Jan 25, 2025 at 8:58 AM Prof David West <profwest at fastmail.fm> 
> wrote:
>
>     Pieter,
>
>     I applaud your use of AI to improve your writing. It is my belief
>     that the*"proper"* use of AI, along with computers and computing
>     tools in general, is to _augment_ human abilities ala Vannevar
>     Bush's "how we may think," Douglas Englebart's institute, Alan
>     Kay's dynabook, (the fictional Young Ladies Primer of Stephenson's
>     /Diamond Age/), and Jobs' "bicycle for the mind."
>
>     This is in direct contrast, it seems, to the sentiments of most on
>     this list who think that AI should, and inevitably will, replace
>     "inferior" human intelligence.
>
>     I am curious if you see any question of "voice" in the AI improved
>     text? For example, I took glen's question as nothing more than an
>     observation that the "voice" of your post seemed to that of
>     ChatGPT instead of Pieter—definitely not *"augmented-Pieter,"* as
>     I believe you intended it to be.
>
>     All of us respect Pieter and value his words. If, however, we are
>     confused by "voice." it raises issues of how much consideration
>     the writing should receive and how we should respond.
>
>     Improving oneself, and one's writing, is a great goal. And we all
>     have experienced examples of "I wish I had said that," or "I wish
>     I had expressed that idea as eloquently as she did." If AI tools
>     provide wordings that you admire, or feel express your ideas more
>     eloquently, you should adopt them.
>
>     Personally, I do not believe that AI can ever provide more
>     'eloquent' writing, only more precise or more complete writing. So
>     I, again, strictly personally, would eschew using such tools as
>     currently constructed. I would however, if I had the chance, use
>     Richard Gabriel's tool, /Inkwell/, which, BTW, he emphatically
>     states is not an AI, to enhance my writing. But Richard is
>     primarily a poet and writer, despite his education and career in
>     AI and computing, and he created /Inkwell/ expressly to be a
>     writer's assistant. I have tremendous respect for Richard's
>     writing and I know he uses Inkwell to enhance his intrinsic abilities.
>
>     davew
>
>
>     On Fri, Jan 24, 2025, at 10:48 PM, Pieter Steenekamp wrote:
>>     I was surprised by the comment "I hope I'm wrong. But that text
>>     reads like it was generated by an LLM"  At first, I just thought,
>>     'so what?' But it got me thinking about how AI changes how we
>>     communicate, which is really important to me.
>>
>>     Here's my main point:
>>
>>     I think it's okay to use others, whether they're people or AI, to
>>     help me communicate better, as long as the ideas are mine and I'm
>>     not copying someone else's work. If using AI to polish my words
>>     bothers someone, we can talk about it.
>>
>>     Here's some background on why I think this way:
>>
>>     a) Learning to communicate is one of the best things you can take
>>     away from school or university. For example if a student is
>>     supposed to use her own words in an assignment, then using AI or
>>     asking someone else to rewrite is wrong.
>>
>>     b) In the workplace, we've always had people like personal
>>     assistants or speech writers. I see using AI in the same way,
>>     just a modern tool to help.
>>
>>     c) Writing assistance used to be expensive because you needed
>>     people. Now, AI can do the job for free, and that doesn't go
>>     against what I believe is right.
>>
>>     d) Your writing should still sound like you. So, I write
>>     something first, then ask AI to make it better but keep it simple
>>     and in my style, like, 'Please make this sound better but keep it
>>     easy to understand.' I now realise I violated this previously and
>>     will adapt.
>>
>>     e) Maybe it's good, depending on the situation, to mention when
>>     you've used AI in your writing.
>>
>>     f) Here's a funny story: I used AI to help write a message for an
>>     AI workshop, and someone complimented the writing so much they
>>     suggested I should be a writer instead!
>>
>>     My bottom line:
>>
>>     I plan to add a note at the end of each message in this group
>>     saying I used AI to help with my writing. If my using AI is a
>>     problem for anyone here, feel free to ask me to leave the group
>>     or simply remove me from the group.
>>
>>     Note: I use AI to assist my writing.
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